Thursday, September 5, 2013

9.5 Analysis!

I think I have everyone's blog up who has sent me one.  If I have spelled your name wrong or missed you - please let me know.  I will be writing some comments to you for Blog 1 before next class.

This is  REALLY long post = but think of it this way:  I haven't assigned you readings in a text book!

Analysis: Slowing it down + naming what we do as we think.
In today's class we worked on analysis.  We started out by making a list of some of the words you used to describe what you do when you do analysis.  These were all good general descriptions for analysis - but most of them like "researching" or "thinking" were complex proceses with lots of steps.  Our work this today was to pay close attention to our thinking processes so we could name the different steps we took as we engaged in analytic process. 

You worked in groups to solve a particular "brain teaser." I asked you to pay attention to, and to name the different moves you made as you tried to solve the puzzle = and you did (and you were awesome). After each group had worked their way through to an answer (which was pretty amazing) you made a list of the steps you took  & we wrote them on the board.  The list below is a generalized summary of what you noticed yourselves doing.  As you read through = pay attention to the language. 
  
Analytic process for solving the puzzle.
 1. DEFINE the problem/question you are solving (identify the problem/question)
This step included ORIENTING to the data (deciding the perspective or focus for your analysis).  In this case  - looking at the picture with the question right side up, and reading right to left, and down the page, was the easiest orientation.
   
Idenfityand name what counts as DATA (information relevant to your problem/question) = in this problem relevant data were features of the shapes, as well as information about their sequence.  This is part of the next step. 
 
2. Name = noticing the FEATURES in your data that are significant to your problem
 
You notice that there were different shapes
That some of the shapes were oriented differently
That the shapes were different colors
 
Before you could talk in your group about patterns or how the problem worked you needed to NAME the features of your data
 
3. CATEGORIZE= put data with similar FEATURES  into groups
Categories
= groups of things with shared features
This was a beginning step for looking for a patterns
This step sometimes included counting the members of a category (how many of each kind of shape/color/orientation) and it sometimes included noticing local groups or clusters (like the groups of two symbols of the same kind).

Looking at a local group (just part of the problem) is called BRACKETING = like putting [around part of the problem] so you can concentrate on a smaller, more manageable piece of data.  I think every group made important progress through looking at small, local groupings as a way to predict what other local groupings would be. 
 
4. Look for patterns
 In this step you used the names and groups you identified as ways to talk about repetitions, cycles and larger sequences. 
You identified lots of different local patterns = which shapes ALWAYS went together, or the order in which shapes followed one another. 
To develop different patterns - your looked at the puzzle from different ORIENTATIONS, and you also BRACKETED off sections so you could just look at part of the puzzle at a time
 
5. Pose local theories
Once you noticed a pattern in color, or sequence, or grouping  - you formed an idea of what that pattern might look like if it were true for the whole puzzle.  The idea of what a pattern would look like when it applies to ALL your data is a theory.
 
Theories often are connected to patterns that you already know.  For example, most of you "read" the puzzle from right to left (for different reasons) and from top to bottom (either because of spreadsheets, or because that is the way we read in western culture, some of you connected to the 3X3 matrices of sudokus, and some of you tried columns).

Others noticed that there was a black shape in every row but the last one, and guessed the club (which is the right answer) => but the wrong reason.  There is also a diamond in every row but the last one => the REAL answer is about the sequence of the shapes (a  BIG theory). Some of you theorized that the club occurred next because of the sequence (which shapes were always on either side of the upside down club)=> this was the right LOCAL theory, but it was not a GLOBAL theory (one that could account for all the data - and predict what would happen with additional data.
 
6. Test your theories!
 Once you had a local theory (about two shapes always following each other, or being above each other, or about the color distribution) you tested your theory by checking to see if the pattern you identified applied to the WHOLE puzzle. 

If the theory didn't FIT (explain what you could see) and WORK (allow you to generate or extend the data further by predicting the pattern) - you decided the theory was wrong - and cycled back through the steps - re-thinking the names and groupings and patterns that you had already tried. You might even need to go back and re-define the problem.
 
7. Use local theory to pose BIG/GLOBAL theory (to explain the whole system)
Once you found a theory that seemed to fit and work for part of the puzzle - the next step is to see if you can use your theory to predict what would happen in new situations.  For this puzzle - the correct answer allows you to name the right "shape" at any point in the series.
 
Reflections on our work together:  In addition to observing these steps (and writing them down -good work!), we noticed that this process was not linear. As we pointed out at the beginning of the exercise - thinking is messy, it doesn't go in a straight line. You cycled through these processes, sometimes jumping from one to another. For example, you might have posed a local theory, found that it didn't "work" and then gone back to identifying features to figure out why the theory didn't work. This new consideration of features then might lead you to different categories. And so on.
 
As explained in class, the purpose of doing this exercise was for us to analyze(!) analytic process => and you certainly did that.  You now have language (and a process)
  • to identify and name the "features" of analytic process,
  • to put those features into categories,
  • and to pose a theory about relationships among those categories that can "explain" how analysis works. 
 
So that's what we did.
 
WHY SLOWING DOWN AND NAMING ANALYTIC PROCESS IS IMPORTANT.
1. Researchers need names and categories to communicate about analysis so that they can share their thinking/analyses to others.  This is important both in talking and in writing.  This exercise drew your attention to some of the names researchers use as they talk about analysis (DATA, NAMING, FEATURES, CATEGORIZING, LOCAL THEORY, FIT & WORK, etc).  
 
2. Awareness of research process allows us to "prove" our answers.  Without conscious awareness of how to do analysis, we tend to fall back on "intuitive" patterns for thinking.  These ways of thinking  are generally "quick & dirty" = meaning they give you a rapid insight with a usable answer. This thinking takes place rapidly - and you often don't know how you got your answer - so you won't be able to "prove" it.
 
3. Complex research problems/questions can feel overwhelming if you do not consciously "know the moves" to work through analysis.  Because our analytic process is mostly "automatic" - when we are faced with a problem we aren't familiar with, or a question that has many, many different ways to think about answers - our automatic approaches don't have something familiar (from our experience) to latch onto.
 
We spent some time at the very end of class applying the analytic process to a question about communication dynamics in class.  By naming what we remembered as happening in class (Naming) and observing patterns (noticing what happens when teachers and students talk in certain ways)  - we were on our way to pose theories about how teachers might improve (or at least do something different) talk in the classroom.
 
As a final step in this process, we reflected - as a group - on the effects of doing analysis as a team.
 
You noticed that:
  •  people do analysis differently - they bring different backgrounds and talents to the problem and have different experiences to draw from
  • much of problem solving is working backward
  • doing something and reflecting on it at the same time is hard
  • group members have different take

This is all true. And if we focus on the effects of working with a group, we notice that it was probably more interesting, less frustrating, and easier to work on the problem for a longer period of time because you were working with a team.  So = we are going to be a team this semester.  It is the BEST way to do research.

For next class:
Read: Data Set 1: Shaggy Dog Stories

Blog 2:  (and please label this post as Blog 2)
1) in your own words => boil down all that writing from this long post and define analysis.  What is it?  How does it work?   
2) Describe how you might use analysis in one of the research projects you described for your first blog (or a different project if you don't like any of the ideas you came up with for the first post). 

These are some useful questions to think about when planning how to analyze a project.  Your blog post doesn't need to answer all of them = they are hear to give you something to write into.
What kinds of questions might you ask?
What might you notice/look for?
What kinds of surrounding circumstances, actions, actors, interactions, outcomes etc might it be useful to name?
 
GREAT CLASS - and I am looking forward to seeing you on Tuesday!   



Tuesday, September 3, 2013

9.3 Writing studies research, critical analysis and setting up a blog

Thanks for the great class today.  As you can see I have edited the site to include the links to your blogs - and some of you have already posted!   I will provide you some feedback on how you are doing as a blog poster so far - hopefully before class on Thursday.

Today we got through the introductions so that I have faces for the names on my roster, each of you talked a little about what you are doing in school and what you want to do with writing.  Looks like we have a great class - a mix of education majors and some writing majors - so we should be able to learn from each other.

NIH Certificates.  I pointed out the link to the NIH assignment - the due date on the assignment sheet is incorrect.  It is due September 17, as listed on the course calendar.  If you have already completed NIH training for another course - you may send that certificate.  Make sure to send an IMAGE of the certificate (I cannot get into your account through the link, and the number is not sufficient evidence of training).

We spent the last part of class creating blogs.  You will post to your blog after every class and you earn 250 points for those posts (about 10 points a post, with a few missed blogs for free because there are more than 25 classes).  Blog posts are a great place for taking chances, putting out ideas for feedback, and raising questions.  See the syllabus for the criteria for evaluation.

I think that about covers it for today.

For next class:
SEND ME A LINK TO YOUR BLOG (if you haven't already)
Work on the NIH training (if you haven't already completed it). 
Review the syllabus + calendar and let me know if you have further questions (we kind of ran out of time).
Blog 1:  What kind of writing studies research do you think you might be interested in?

Monday, September 2, 2013

9.2.13 First day of class

Welcome to ENG 3029!

As you can see, I have left the posts and the blogs from last term.  If you like - you can look through them to get a feel for how the class will go. 

As it says on the syllabus (posted under course documents to the right), we will use this blog as a kind of "hub" for course communications.  After each class I will post an update of what we did - and the assignment for what to do for the next class. To do well in this class - you will want to check the blog after every class. If it is more than 24 hours after class and I have not yet posted the update - I am hoping one of you will do me the favor of sending me a reminder!  I am very human and I will make mistakes.  One advantage of a blog is that it can be more interactive.  That can work to all of our advantages if we work together. 

So we will see how this goes. . . .

Monday, May 13, 2013

5.13 Grades

You did an awesome job on your final papers.  For the two sections of ENG 3029, the grades were as follows:

A 11
B  12
C  7

If you have questions, confusions or complaints, write to me before Tuesday at 2:00.  I plan to post your grades to Keanwise on Wednesday.

Thanks for all your good work!  It has been a great pleasure to work with you this term.  Good luck in your lives as writers, students & researchers (and teachers!) and stop by once in a while to let me know how you are doing.

FYI: I did not give credit for blogs posted after the end time (end of class on the last day) posted  on the blog.

Tuesday, May 7, 2013

5.7 Last class (see previous post for assignment for Blog 28)

Today Alison, Sharyn, and Devon gave their presentations, and we spent the rest of class wrapping up loose ends.

I walked you through the process for your self-assessment of your research projects (see previous post).  You will post this assessment as Blog 28.

Turning in your work:
Blog 29 will be your final research essay.  You should also send your essay to me as an attachment to the course email. 
Any work must be turned in by 5:45 Thursday, May 9.

How you will get your grade.
I will grade your work as fast as I can.  I will send you a grade sheet listing your points for each category listed on the syllabus via the course email as soon as I have finished grading (hopefully no later than Tuesday, May 14 but maybe as early as Sunday).  If you do not feel the grade on the gradesheet accurately reflects your work for the term - you should send me an email within 24-hours where you describe what you think should be different.  At that point, we will either work this out (especially if I have made a mistake, which I sometimes do) - or not.  At the end of the 24 hours I will post your grades to Keanwise, and any further negotiation will have to take place through a grade appeal.

We will not meet in the classroom on 5.9.  I will be in my office most of the day Wednesday and Thursday if anyone wants to stop by for some last minute conferencing.

Closing remarks:
You have been a wonderful group to work with.  I have appreciated your good work both as individuals and as a group.  Your support for your classmates during their presentations, and your participation during group work were outstanding.  I wish each of you the best in your future studies - and have a great summer!

5.7 Assessing your research project

Blog 28:  Using the criteria below, write an evaluation of your research project.  You can earn 25 points extra credit if your assessment of your work matches mine.

Essay:
150 points
Data + analysis: 200 points (with check point grades for data + analysis)
Writing process: 150 points


I. Evaluating your final draft:  Use the rubric below (150)
Focus (45): clear statement of the research question(s) + the importance of the research and what it shows
direct statements of what the data shows
set up any background information necessary for the reader to understand the focus
appropriate choice of research essays
data is connected to the focus/makes points with respect to the focus

Audience/genre (40)
uses the correct forms for research essays
uses language the ways it is used in the sample research essays
draws authority from other research and the logic of the argument

Organization (30)
data is presented in the right place
one idea leads logically to the next
definitions/data/categories  are presented and explained before they are "used" or referred to
uses headings + paragrphing in ways suitable for the material
each section develops the focus in a different way

Development (30)
detailed examples from the data to support the points
says what the examples show
connects to the discussion of the research
develops an in-depth (not obvious) discussion of what the data show

Correctness (5)
writing sufficiently clear so as not to confuse the meaning
not so many errors as to distract from the meaning of the text


II. Criteria: Data + analysis were listed on the assignment sheet as follows (200 points):
1. Data will be collected in a written form and posted on the blog or submitted as an attachment to an email, no less than 2 weeks prior to the final due data (eg. Notes from observations, transcripts, documentation of chats/online posts, etc)


2. Notes with a preliminary analysis (categories=names of important features relevant to the research question, etc along with several sections from the data that are examples of those categories) will be submitted no later than one week before the final due data). 
To evaluate your data+ Analysis:List the blog posts which included data + analysis
Discuss the completeness + quality of your data= did you have enough data to provide a broad basis for your project?  Did you have the RIGHT data to develop an exploration of your research question?
Discuss the completeness + quality of your anlaysis= did you identify useful categories?  Did you discover new ideas in your data?  Did your analysis connect to your research question /or generate a new question?
List how many points you think you earned out of 200 and explain why.

III.  Criteria for the Writing process were listed on the assignment sheet as follows (150 points):

The essay will be developed through a series of drafts that demonstrate:

1. a variety of techniques for invention and revision (blog posts for research plan + brainstorming for topic)
2. increased quality of writing and ideas throughout the revision process (posts of successive drafts or sections of drafts)
3. thoughtful analysis of how and what to revise in successive drafts (evidence in blog posts about what you will revise, how you chose your topic, what you need to work on for your project) 

To evaluate your writing process:

List the blog posts that demonstrate your writing process:
Discuss the quality of your writing process in terms of its variety + effectiveness (point 1 above)
Evaluate the quality of your revising process (point 2 above)
Evaluate the "writing about writing" posts where you plan what you need to do, reflect on the effectiveness of what you have done so far & write about what you will work on (point 3 above)


State how many points out of 150 you earned and why,

Thursday, May 2, 2013

5.2 Even more presentations!

Good job  Amy, Sarah, Paul, Oriana, and Bri.  On Tuesday we will hear from Sharyn, Alison, and Devon = and celebrate!

Also on Tuesday, we will look back at the assignment sheet, and you will do some final revising to your essays, and we will talk about how to turn in your work and the process for getting your grade. 

Here are some general tips:

1. Your essay should have a title that gives an accurate (and inviting= maybe even clever?) indication of what you are writing about.  I do not want to read any essays titles "research paper".

2. Headings should give a content-based indication of what is in the section that follows.  Use your headings to give your readers detailed, accurate information.  Informative headings are KEY components of effective essays.

3. As you revise:
  • Make sure each paragraph relates to/develops your focus.  If writing goes off on a tangent =>delete it!  Longer is NOT better.
  • Check to see that your points are in the right order.
  • Write transitions between your paragraphs/sections. 
  • Make sure you include a statement of the relevance of your project to writing studies.
4. Remember that the page limit is 10 pages, double spaced.

5.  The Data analysis section should be the longest section of your essay.  Demonstrating that you can break down complex language passages or actions into their component parts and identify patterns and relationships that explain how that language or action works is the point of this course.

Blog 27: If you gave your presentation today, post your reflections on what you have to work on
if you gave your presentation earlier, post your ongoing revisions,
if you are doing your presentation May 7, post the draft you will present on

I will provide feedback on Blogs 25 + 26, Tuesday before class.

Have a great weekend, and THE END IS NEAR!